Homework feedback - graded #1

writing

I have read and graded your homework.The biggest problems were:
a) Too many short sentences.
b) Silly spelling mistakes.
c) Assignment on more than ONE page.
d) Presentation needs work

audio

I have also listened to your audio files, here is my general feedback:
a) You need to slow down when you speak.
b) Use your voices to explain emotion.
c) Beginning / end of audio. Hello etc.
d) This needs to be 2min - 3min.