I have read and graded your homework.The biggest problems were: a) Too many short sentences. b) Silly spelling mistakes. c) Assignment on more than ONE page. d) Presentation needs work
I have also listened to your audio files, here is my general feedback: a) You need to slow down when you speak. b) Use your voices to explain emotion. c) Beginning / end of audio. Hello etc. d) This needs to be 2min - 3min.